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04/26/2009

Loose Tooth by 7

Loose Tooth


Loose tooth, 
Loose tooth, wiggly, twisty, turny.
Loose tooth,
loose tooth, turny, wiggly--
SNAP!
Ow! 
At least I got my loose tooth out.


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The "SNAP!" part sounds scary, so good work on the line breaks - if you're aiming for that. There's also the thrill of just twisting and turning, which is mirrored in the playful words you chose. Very vivid way to put it. Now, how about one for a dentist appointment?

Posted by: Sterling Delorme | 08/15/2011 at 01:35 PM

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